The story The First Time - Sex on Saturday Morning is now complete. It is quite a bit shorter than my first story. I hope that you like it anyway. The word total for the new story was 765. The word total for the first story was 4,868.
I've been editing as I go along so I hope that I've been doing a pretty good job of it. I know typos, grammatical errors and misspellings can be annoying to readers and I plan on going back to both stories to look for errors.